Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Feedback for John

I agree with a lot of what Chandler and Montana said...

Story: A theif is part of a guild along with his father and a count. He really wants to leave the guild, but needs to steal a treasure box from the count before he can. As he is trying to steal it, the count is aware that the theif is in his house because he got a call from the bowler man, the theif's father. The count catches the theif who tries to steal from the count and kills him. The count goes to the bowler man/theif's father to prove he has done his duty of killing the theif, and the bowler man kills the count for killing his son.

I wrote close questions throughout, but here are some questions I had at the end:
  • What exactly is this guild? What are the rules of it? Why does the theif want to leave it so badly, and why has he waited until now to decide to leave?
  • Who is exactly in charge/in power? Where does the count stand vs. the bowler man (like Chandler said, the heirarchy)
  • What is the big buff man's job exactly?

I also agree that the play was a little confusing at first because I wasn't sure who the theif was and who the bowler man was...maybe instead of labeling the theif "Theif", a name might create more mystery, and then the audience would have to figure out he's the theif based on his actions/words, and the same goes for the other characters.

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